11.3 Migration: Missing It Already.
Migration: Missing It Already.We watch the geese leave usamidst much honking. No honkingup here otherwise except in summer,when the tourists swell our ranks.In the winter, only streetlights and...
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"In the winter, only streetlights and snow." Such a simple like, but so effective. It conjures up a vivid picture, very much the way I think of winter. Love this: the place we’d always known we’d come...
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Very vivid for those of us who have lived and frozen through a long winter: In the winter, only streetlights and snow. As always very moving, lots of touchable moments and thought provoking realism....
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GretaMost of your poems are fictional memoirs.I like how you incorporate the title and the poem.
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There's a lot going on in this draft!I get the story of moving home, and the story of the import store--now closed? I, too, love the streetlights and snow line. Interesting side point about what is...
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This makes a nice pivot in the narrative: We made some kind of peace with the past and out of nowhere it seemed that time had come to be merchants, traveling year after year to brown-skinned countries...
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Wonderful sisterhood, the craving of other women's stories.
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I also love the word "merch" - might have a title there? And the "wingless territory" is also brilliant.
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